The Carltom Menace

Cam · Posted: Thu Jan 16, 2003 6:08 am

A long time ago, in a galaxy far far away...

Turmoil has engulfed the once prosperous planet of Nabloo. The greedy Trafl Federation has set up a blockade around it, so that goods cannot enter and the oversupply of old goods in the Nabloo cities themselves has caused rot and smell and an increase in vermin on the streets.

A newly elected senator has taken control of most of the diplomacy, giving Nabloo people hope that the blockade can be lifted. Senator Justintime assumed his position after the previous Senator, Pigzars Honker, had to retire due to ill health and pressure due to his shady business dealings with other world agents who robbed Nabloo of wealth, and attracted the attention of the Trafl Federation.

Senator Justintime has been agressive in his talk, but his actions have failed to change any of the Trafl Federations sanctions. Still, the Nabloo have hope.

Elsewhere in the galaxy...

There is a dark force seeking to influence and confuse the weak and poor. Darth Brooks, Dark Master of the Pith has glided into spheres of influence after being unheard of for some time. His greatest achievement is the Pith Temple, a monument to his religion. This features hard to access seats, because in the Pith, there is usually only two, a master and an apprentice - so seats are an afterthought.

The Pith Temple features a retractable roof and shifting surface to relect both the modern and the ancient outlook of the Pith. Darth Brooks aims to spread his shadow over all of Victorusant and beyond, and ensure that every creature in the realm ends up taking the Pith, a dark self-renewing ritual...

to be continued...

Hard at it. The Collingwood way.

[This message has been edited by Cam (edited 15 January 2003).]

magpie willow · Posted: Thu Jan 16, 2003 6:43 am

Great stuff Cam! Your a top writer good work mate!

NEON LEON CLAP CLAP NEON LEON CLAP NEON LEON CLAP CLAP!

Miss_Lisey_Molloy · Posted: Thu Jan 16, 2003 4:54 pm

Lol good stuff Cam!
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if only i could understand what it all meant)

Love always, Alyssa xoxo

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Northern Pie · We are watching! Joined: 27 May 2001 Location: Queensland

Great Story Cam, but I can't help thinking just how bored we all are during the offseason....lol....roll on season 2003!!!

cheers

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Murray · Posted: Fri Jan 17, 2003 3:21 am

As always Cam - Excellent

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