Help with editing? Pretty please!

[sherrife]

Hi guys,

I have a slightly outrageous favour to ask involving some extra-homework and time away from your busy lives... The last 2 weeks have seen my busy writing a 7-8 thousand word report that I have now finished... Well.. I was wondering if any of you highly educated and non-slack-jawed-yokel pie fans would be able to help out with some editing and proofing?

I would only ask that you give it a quick run through and highlighting the parts that are poorly explained or whatever else. I would have taken it to uni academics etc but it's supposed to be accessible to the reasonably educated layman, which uni professors are not.

So if you're willing to do it, send me a private message with your email and i will happily oblige.

Yours Gratefully (in advance),

Omar